Simple and Effective
I’m going to sound like a broken record. Pardon me for preaching. I’ve been writing and commenting on this topic for years. Most radio commercials are written from a flyer, or a newspaper ad. Most commercials make the business the focus of attention. The ad list tons of features. It’s usually written with a ton of information about the business. The print ads sometimes list a ton of products and may include pictures and even some attractive prices. This is not a bad concept for print. The business is saying “look at what we have.” When you take this same information and cram it into a radio commercial you’ve created a boring ad. You also confuse the listener with too much information. How do you write a good commercial? First, don’t write an ad. Write as if you’re sharing information with your best friend. Tell a story about how your product makes the customers life better. Forget your products features. Focus on the benefits the customer receives. If you can, include proof of your claim. Customer testimonials provide strong proof that your product delivers. I realize this sounds simple. It’s actually very hard to do. As you start to write about what you offer you’ll keep thinking of more things you think the customer should know. It’s hard to focus on a single benefit. Give it a try. I’m sure you’ll see what I mean.